My Rating: 3.5 / 5.0
Wrath is the only purebred vampire left
on Earth, but he refuses to acknowledge his position as King. Instead, he is
the leader of the Black Dagger Brotherhood, a group of warriors who protect
their race against their deadly enemies, the undead Lessers. Almost blind and
tortured by the loss of his parents, Wrath is aptly named, so when Darius, one
of the Brothers, asks him to help his half-human daughter to survive her
transition to full vampire-hood, Wrath refuses. He is not meant to be soft and
gentle, loving and giving: his role is to kill Lessers and keep everyone at
arm’s length. Then Darius is blown up by a car bomb and wrath realizes that he
must fulfill his promise.
Mr X is one of an endless line of Lessers: homicidal
psychopaths that find their way to the Omega and gladly sacrifice their souls
in return for immortality and the freedom to kill as many vampires as they can
find. Most Lessers do not survive very long against the Black Dagger
Brotherhood, but Mr X has been hunting them for a long time and has become very
good at it. He works out of a martial arts training center as he trains and
organizes the local Lessers into a more efficient fighting force. He is also
interested in recruiting new Lessers, and Billy Riddle has caught his eye as a
real candidate.
Beth Randall is a newspaper reporter
who is being sidelined by her lecherous boss. One night, on her way home from
work, she is attacked by a pair of teenage boys who try to rape her. She fights
them off and later identifies one of them as Billy Riddle, a senator’s son
with a record of sexual assaults and violence. Her friends in the police force
are concerned for her, especially Butch, who exacts his own revenge on Billy
and is then suspended. When she meets a tall, dark, handsome stranger, who
tells her that her he knew her father, she is compelled to find out more.
This urban fantasy is an enjoyable read, but it does
have some issues that I could not overlook. In short, it is what we in Britain
call a ‘curate’s egg’, which means that is a mixture of both good and bad bits.
I will start with my most favorite aspects of the
story. The characterization is good, with a mostly show rather than tell way of
conveying personality. The dialogue is very good at giving us a strong
impression of a character very quickly, so that it is easy to distinguish
between the different Brothers, for example. On the whole I liked both Wrath
and Beth, finding them both to be credible and sympathetic. I have to give
special mention to my favorite characters in the book: Fritz and Butch. Fritz
is Darius’ butler, who enjoys serving Wrath, Beth and anyone else who will let
him. He is wonderfully drawn and I kept giggling at him and his witty dialogue.
I loved how he could manipulate Wrath whilst remaining totally subservient. Butch
is your typical insensitive alpha male cop who is living in the wrong century
and gets confessions by ‘persuasion’. His reactions to Beth are touching, as is
his back-story, and his reaction to Marrisa is sweet and funny.
The dialogue is excellent, with lots of witty banter
and characters bouncing off one another. I particularly like the scenes when
Butch is first introduced to the Brothers and manages to avoid being eaten by
talking about baseball. The banter between him and the Brothers goes from tense
to bizarre and, finally, to hilarious as they accept him as a true warrior,
even if he is only a human. I also liked the variation upon the ‘good’ vampire
theme. In this case the evil undead are actually the Lessers, who are decidedly
nasty and smell of baby powder. Also, we have two deities introduced: the Omega
and the Scribe Virgin. These mysterious characters are not very well explained
or used to miraculously solve problems, but are interesting aspects of a
different mythology.
So, what is not to like? Well, I have a real problem
with the Brothers’ names. At the beginning we have Darius, which is fine, then
Wrath is introduced, still OK, but then we get Tohrment, Vishous, Rhage, Phury
and Zsadist. I am sorry, but these are just naff names, and the ‘unusual’
spelling just makes them even sillier. This is a shame, because these are
really badass Warriors, so I do not want to giggle whenever I see their names
written down. There is no suggestion that these are adopted names, even though
they are appropriate for each man, so they were born with them: yikes!
Although I quite like Beth, she does seem to be
amazingly stupid, which I always find difficult to read. She finds Wrath
strangling Butch and then follows him when he runs off? I believe the phrase is
‘too stupid to live’. Also, I found that they and their romance were more than
a little predictable. Do we have to have a heroine who is so beautiful that
everyone’s jaw hits the floor as she walks past, even though she is insecure
and unaware of her effect on people? Does our hero have to have a tortured past
and so be unwilling to have close relationships, even when he is sure that he
has found the woman of his dreams? I had hoped for a little more originality.
Sparky at Fangs for the Fantasy is very critical of the speed with which Beth
and Wrath get horizontal, and I have to agree with her. I always find it
disappointing if the romance moves straight from meeting to sex, because it
effectively removes the possibility of real ‘romance’: even Butch wants to take
it slow with Marissa. I am not a prude, and I enjoy a good sex scene as much as
the next person, but, heck, they could wait until they have exchanged phone
numbers!
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